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Im just submitting stuff left and right now huh?
uhm so this is my second ever commission! and hummingbird anatomy is quite strange.... no watermark because I dont like them, but the picture, of course, belongs to me! hard to pick a category, its animals and landscapes Comments
my critiques are gonna be lacking these days - very short and sweet so I hope you don't mind
Love the mountains - personally I think they are a hard surface to imitate and you did them great I feel the sunset needs to be blended more but did you use markers? that would explain the problem probably the center of the sunflower needs more texture and the hummingbird's colors feel a bit off but perhaps that is just me! -- -Kelly clicky clicky!! it is more the main one, not the one that is flying
gray is just not a hummingbird color in my opinion -- -Kelly clicky clicky!! |
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June 3
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HP Scanjet djf4100 Jun 2, 2009, 5:30:28 PM Share
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Critiques
I love the way you made the gradient on the sky, it really seems to give off energy and the colours enhance the meaning to this piece nicely. Let me congratulate you for the wonderful job you did on the rocks, I'm impressed! The lighting on them is fantastic and the shading gives it a natural look that really draws my attention.
Another thing I love is the sunflower <3 The blending on the petals is lovely and it makes the sunflower stand out.
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